WIP -- Hardwired Hinterland

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WIP -- Hardwired Hinterland
« on: May 23, 2018, 04:27:23 AM »
New back cover for Hardwired Hinterland, rev 2.   8)

Still a work in progress at this time.

Added as attachment, since the link stopped working once SSL was implemented.
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Re: WIP -- Hardwired Hinterland
« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2018, 06:37:08 AM »
Oh, that's nice! Main colour and background texture actually adds to the look of it without impeding readability, which is all too rarely the case.

I'd click on the Karma thing, but I quickly realised that it doesn't show up on the mobile version of the forum, which is how I generally view it.
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‘If a man does not make new acquaintance as he advances through life, he will soon find himself left alone. A man, Sir, should keep his friendship in constant repair.’
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Re: WIP -- Hardwired Hinterland
« Reply #2 on: May 23, 2018, 11:56:21 AM »
I kept finding Karma turned off, after each backup.  The last time I went in to turn it on I realized that what it was tracking was total up and down votes accrued by each forum member, not tracking likes per post, AND I was already seeing trolling.   I left it off.

Thanks for the nice comment.    :)
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Back Cover, option 2
« Reply #3 on: May 23, 2018, 03:16:54 PM »
Because I can't stop fiddling.  Too much?

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Is the second plane too busy?
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Re: WIP -- Hardwired Hinterland
« Reply #4 on: May 23, 2018, 03:54:43 PM »
A bit, yes.
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Re: WIP -- Hardwired Hinterland
« Reply #5 on: May 23, 2018, 04:58:33 PM »
Thanks.  Elaboration creep was creeping.  Will save the biplane for elsewhere.    ::)
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Re: WIP -- Hardwired Hinterland
« Reply #6 on: May 24, 2018, 12:28:52 AM »
I'd suggest losing the flame from the dragon.  I wasn't sure at first if it was the plane engine on fire or firing some kind of weapon at the dragon.  Just buzzing close to a dragon is exciting enough, the danger is very real even if it isn't breathing fire at the moment. 

The Bi-plane version, yeah, way too busy.

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Re: WIP -- Hardwired Hinterland
« Reply #7 on: May 24, 2018, 07:55:55 PM »
Thanks.   :)
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Re: WIP -- Hardwired Hinterland
« Reply #8 on: January 11, 2019, 06:43:30 PM »
Sorry I dropped out for so long.  There was some controversy over the artist for the new Savage Worlds B13 setting up a Patreon page, and I started to look into maybe doing the same thing... but the massive delays getting Portals IV out have left me very wary of not having a thing in hand when I ask for money.  Then the holidays and a series of family emergencies hit.  So I waffled and stopped posting while I didn't make up my mind.

Anyway HH 2nd Edition is twenty pages from done.

I was hoping to surprise you for Christmas... but failed. These remaining pages are partly things like the TOC and Index, but half are tricky new content.  When those are done, I will send it out for proofreading and content editing.

Any questions?
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Re: WIP -- Hardwired Hinterland
« Reply #9 on: January 13, 2019, 05:51:16 AM »
Another New Environ and scenario put to bed.  Seaside.
Any technology distinguishable from magic is insufficiently advanced. 
--Gehm's corollary to Clark's Third Law